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"Overcoming the harshness of the elements requires focus of the mind..."

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:iconaddictedtorain:
First of all, I have to gush like an over caffeinated fan-girl and remind you for the third (fourth?) time that I adore this picture. I love the idea of a swordsman (ninja, samurai...etc) in the wintertime (my birth season and the season my two daughters were born in).

A few things that I noticed and I'm not saying you can fix them because it is, after all, a picture. You looked tense, it was probably very cold and it looks like you were on a slope albeit a small one. Maybe if you do a scene like this again you could try to relax more. I imagine the ground was cold so I'd suggest a towel or blanket you could park your rump on without anyone seeing it in the picture.

To me, it looked like you were trying a little to hard to relax. I imagine a winter swordsman who has just found a place for a rest would have put his sword against his shoulder so that his hands could tuck closer to him for warmth. Not that he had to look like he was shaking from the cold but even having them closer could have made it looked more relaxed.

That was it really. I adore this picture and the idea of the winter swordsman and if I could add it to my favorites a thousand times, I would. Maybe if you do more pictures the winter swordsman could find himself in a forest? (Though, you are probably in the city.) I hope this critique was helpful at least in some way.
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:iconl-kamikaze-l:
huaha first comment 8D
wonderful pic, like it very much =3

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:iconinuryan:
What you don't see is Chioky-sama after this, huddled up in a blanket drinking hot chocolate.
So much for overcomming harsh elements, eh? XD

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:iconrez-san:
bet you got a wet bottom hehe very nive picture and no need to say thanks on my profile:)
:iconazukari-chan:
buhahahaha xD
funny pic :p
really winter swordsman (or black yeti xD)!

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"Kawaii, kawaii Nanao-cha~n!
Lovely, lovely Nanao-cha~n...!"
Kyōraku Shunsui ("Bleach")
:iconcrazylolo:
Woow, you look very...cool :katana:

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:icongin-kusanagi:
Wow. Awesomeness picture. Is the katana metal, or you make it?

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:iconballedkalilee:
:O ............ *worship worship worship!*

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:iconniflheimangel:
A very good pic you have here ^^
:iconfelix-demon:
Poser XD

Makes me wonder who takes your pictures, or if you have a tripod you set up (in which case... Well, yeah anywho)

Very nice picture, none-the-less. All the snow here has melted already, which really sucks >.>

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:iconlordviral:
Now that is cool! I wish it snowed where I'm at. And the quote below is so true. :thumbsup: Excellent job!!

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